I chose to do my peer reviews on Jasmine and Jennifer. First off lets talk about Jasmine's brochure which she did on Shawn's company "Brly Legal". I think Jasmine's brochure was very well. The contrast between the two colors made the text easier to read. Another thing that was good, was the pictures that she had because as she said pictures on the front of brochures attract people more than they do without pictures. One thing I feel that she could have done better was the text. Most of it was sort of slang which some not MOST but some people don't really like to read which made parts of the brochure unprofessional. Other than that, for the most part the whole brochure was pretty good.
Now on to Jennifer's brochure. I think that Jennifer had a great brochure on Sophie's Restaurant. She had a lot of info such as prices, menus, etc. This is good because when people see brochures about food chains, they want to see what they are getting and how much it will be before they actually go and get what they want. Also she had pictures of the meals which is also good because it shows you how you can expect the meal once you order it. To be completely honest, I do not really recall anything that was really bad that she could have improved on.
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